Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reducing the gap between the rich and poor members of
society
is considered by some people to be the optimal solution to achieving happiness. Use synonyms
Although
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this
method can make people happier by providing equality in societies and eliminating poverty, it is impossible to apply. I disagree with Linking Words
this
argument and I believe there are other methods to provide happiness and satisfaction for people.
Closing the gap between all members might be detrimental to societies. Linking Words
Firstly
, if people in all professions received the same wages, Linking Words
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would promote laziness and individuals would Linking Words
instead
pursue easy careers Linking Words
instead
of competitive and demanding ones. Linking Words
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, people aspiring to become doctors or engineers to receive good salaries can Linking Words
instead
work part-time in any industry and still get paid a high salary. Linking Words
Secondly
, many people became rich because they worked hard, while many poor people were not born poor and were, in fact, wealthy but they wasted their money. Working hard would not be Linking Words
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society
were equally privileged.
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Instead
of trying to eliminate the gap between the rich and poor, governments can work on providing more job opportunities. Doing Linking Words
this
promotes equality in a more positive way and in many cases, poor individuals can become rich by working hard and demonstrating their talents. Linking Words
Moreover
, a happy Linking Words
society
highly depends on the services that governments provide for their people. Use synonyms
For example
, if all countries provided free health care and education for their citizens and developed the infrastructure, its people would certainly become happier.
To conclude, governments should focus on taking care of their people by reducing the unemployment rates and subsidizing necessary services for its citizens. These measures are more likely to make people Linking Words
happy
than merely trying to promote equality Suggestion
happier
between
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among
society
members.Use synonyms
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