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The bar charts show that information on phone call types of the number of minutes in the united kingdom, between 1995 to 2002. According to the chart, it is a local call are preparing a fixed line of billions is 71 in 1995 for a gradual increase up to 90 minutes in 1999. National and international for fixed lines slowly is increasing 2% period after the period of 2002. From 2002 onwards to suddenly decrease reduction in 2001 from
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 cycle is low of 71 in billions. Interestingly, all calls are lowest for years, starting of duration 3 minutes slowly upsurge up to 1999. Between 2001, the Suddenly rise of 39 less than 10 before the term than after the 2 billion is varying for mobiles. In a nutshell, the highest of a local call by 1999 and mobiles in 2002, but lower of all calls and international in 1995.

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