Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?

closing

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The closing

Closing

of several high

street

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shops is happening nowadays.There are plenty of reasons behind

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trend and is considered a

productive

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production

growth by a part of society

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however

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presumed that

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development has detrimental consequences

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for

sellers and consumers as well. There are numerous factors responsible for

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the top of which is online shopping, as the

evalution

a process in which something passes by degrees to a different stage (especially a more advanced or mature stage)

evolution

evaluation

evaluations

of

internet

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the internet

makes life easier and fast, there is no need to go out for shopping and to spend hours in

streets

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the streets

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which is

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unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')

obviously

a tiring process

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why people

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these days

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avoid to go out for shopping.The other major cause is discounts available on

internet

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the internet

because of

competion

a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competition

compassion

compression

and less extra charges.

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there are many expenses of a departmental store

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as rent

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levy and

electricty

a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons

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bills which ultimately become a burden on customers in the form of high prices

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the other hand, online stores have not

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expenses and

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less rates as compared to

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stores.

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; people find online shopping not only easy way but

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pocket friendly.

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, online shopping has many

benefits but

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benefits, but

it proves to be detrimental

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to

small business

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as high

street

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shops. I reckon that

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if main

street

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businesses are gone out of

business

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business, then

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surely it

will leads

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will lead

to

problem

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the problem

problems

a problem

of unemployment as many workers

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as salesman

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labour

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cashiers are working in these stores. Apart from

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, people are becoming isolated from the outer world which

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in turn, leads to many problems like obesity

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depression and stress.

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, shopping centres are serving as

community centre

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a community centre

community centres

because people gather and enjoy their shopping

together but

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together, but

if they are

shutted

move so that an opening or passage is obstructed; make shut

shut

down

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oviously

unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')

obviously

social contacts would suffer.

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this

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trend is not only damaging for small

street

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shops but

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for the society. In conclusion,

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there

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some genuine reason like time saving for the closing of departmental stores

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it is a

passimistic

expecting the worst possible outcome

pessimistic

burgeon. According to my opinion, it is defeatist for both consumers and sellers.