In many cities, CCTV cameras are being used in order to tackle crime. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Many countries use

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cctv

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CCTV

cameras to find out the crime easily.In my opinion I strongly believe it is a positive

development

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essay

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

going to discuss about it. Due to advanced technology

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the crimes

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increased to a greater extent.Terrorism is growing more rapidly.

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In order

to terminate

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type of activities the government has found new modern techniques.In some

cases many

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cases, many

innocent people trapped with criminal cases since there is no proper evidence for

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the clear proof or evidence is always needed.So

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CCTV

plays a vital role over here.Many cases

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have been proven

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technique.The person attending crime is not bothered about

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cctv

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CCTV

.Sometimes they are unaware of

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method.The officers are able to

found

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find

the criminals easily with the help of

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CCTV

.In many shops and in

signals

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signals, CCTV

signals CCTV

cctv

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cameras are placed to gather more information. Some

people

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person

compiles that using

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CCTV

is a negative

development

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the crime done by the criminals

are easily trapped

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is easily trapped

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method.In other cases like a highly confidential

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matter

of the country are trapped through

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cctv

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CCTV

.It creates

minor problem

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a minor problem

because it can easily spread through social

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

mediums

.In bank lockers

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CCTV

should not be fitted.

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will not make a bid negative

devopment

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

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a country. To conclude

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CCTV

cameras are used to tackle crimes.It is always a positive

development

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a country.In my opinion, I strongly agree to the positive

development

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.So everyone place

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cctv

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CCTV

cameras in their house.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

236 words

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In many cities, CCTV cameras are being used in order to tackle crime. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Sports play a significant role in promoting physical and mental well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others say it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?