some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed., films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays it became easy and accessible to watch whatever you want while staying

cozy

enjoying or affording comforting warmth and shelter especially in a small space

cosy

home

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. That led a lot of people to give up

about

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the idea of going to cinemas.

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this

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is not the case with all, as there is another group has what supports their idea. On one hand, those who watch movies at

home

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using tablets and phones are claiming that it is important to have an easy access

for

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what you want which

guaranted

give surety or assume responsibility

guaranteed

granted

guarantee

through phones.

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, it is much cheaper to watch films on phones, either you will download or buy them, in both cases it is cheaper than cinema tickets.

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, you can watch what you

want whenever

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want, whenever

you want, you do not need to stick to a certain period or day.

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, those who still support going to cinemas for watching movies have their point too.

Firstly

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, new movies

are not sold

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is not sold

online so if you want to watch them you have to go to cinemas.

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, maybe cinemas are not needed in each and every type of movies, yet, they are certainly

push

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pushing

the enthusiasm

in to another level

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to another level

into another level

when watching epic or action movies. There are some movies that are best to watch in cinemas to feel all the action happening and to live with the

movie

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. Movies like 007 or Batman trilogy.

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, 3D movies and animation are best to be watched at cinemas as they are shown with better

colors

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

and effects. For me, in my opinion, I would go for a mix of both opinions. To clarify, if it is

action

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an action

, animation or epic

movie

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that I know it will take a long time till I can get it online,

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I would certainly choose cinemas specially these new

type

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types

of cinemas like VOX cinemas. But, if it is a social or romantic

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movie or

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movie, or

if it is not highly rated

then

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I can wait for a period to watch it relaxed and for free at

home

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. As a conclusion, people are divided into two sections when it comes

to choose

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to choosing

going to cinemas for watching new movies. Either, they do not see any

neccessaity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

to go there as long as they can watch whatever they want via phones or tablets. Or they love going to

cinemas

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the cinemas

to watch their movies as it is more interesting

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

for certain types of movies. While for me, I would choose to have a mix of these two extremes. So, I need to ask myself

first

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is that

movie

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worth going to

cinema

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the cinema

? Can I get it easily and

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with

a good price online to watch at

home

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? Does it need certain type of arrangements (3D glasses, VOX screens...

etc

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Etc

and

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And

based on that I would decide whether to stay at

home

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or to go to

cinema

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the cinema

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Convenience
Mobile Viewing
Cost-efficient
Time-efficient
Personalized experience
Immersive
Cinematic experience
Surround sound
Collective experience
Technical superiority
Sensory experience
Social hubs
Cultural events
Distractions
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Filmmaking art
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