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30. Some people thinks that government should tax unhealthy food to encourage people to begin to eat more healthy meals. Do you agree or disagree.

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Fast
food
 has
caused man
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causes
y health issues among its consumers and has
also
 created fina
ncial burden for
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a financial burden
 governments worldwide. Some people propose that high
tax
 on
junk
food
 will discourage consumers to purchase them. I personally agree with
this
 proposal. 
To begin
 with, higher
tax
 on
junk
food
 will increase their retail prices on the markets or fast
food
 restaurant.
Therefore
, consumers will hesitate to purchase them.
As a result
, less consuming
junk
food
 will help consumers to s
tay hea
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stay
lthy. Current researches indicate that many health issues are caused consuming too much
junk
food
 among inhabitants of all ages. The majority of these health issues are preventable if people stay away from
junk
food
 and lead a healthy lifestyle.
Moreover
, the expenditure on treating these diseases has
also
 created a huge financial burd
ens for
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burden
 governments worldwide. 
In addition
, in the current societies, people tend to have hectic lifestyles and seldom prepare meals themselves.
Besides
this
, the cheap prices of unhealthy
food
also
 attract their customers as well. If governments elevate the
tax
 on unhealthy
food
, customers would tend to select more healthy one with similar prices.
For example
, people tend to drink a less amount of cokes or other soft drinks if their prices are elevated.In addition, higher
tax
 on fast
food
 will
also
 enhance the revenue income for governments. Eating nutrient
food
 cont
ribute hea
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contributes
lthy bodies for consumers. In conclusion, healthy eating habits will contribute healthy inhabitants;
however
, low-price and delicious
junk
food
 will spoil their eating habits. Elevated
tax
 on
junk
food
 by governments worldwide will increase their prices for which customers are discouraged to purchase them to eat. People will stay healthy by selecting nutrient
food
 rather than
junk
food
.
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