Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some, the sharing of

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in business, academia, and science is beneficial and positive,

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others believe that certain kinds of

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should

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not be shared

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its value and importance. In my view, the dissemination of some types of

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is a positive step for society.

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essay will discuss, how medical research can be advanced by shared

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, and why some business details should be kept secret. The widespread dissemination of scientific

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is a goal that all society should welcome. I believe the benefits of sharing medical research

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to be encouraged as a failure to do so may cost lives.

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, one reason why scientists attend conferences is to present new research and findings into common problems,

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as Cancer, and other diseases. By sharing, scientists can come up with cures much faster together than working apart.

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, not all data ought to be shared as it may prove too costly to do so,

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as business details,

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trade,

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share prices, etc.

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reason, I would agree that certain types of

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should not be widespread.

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, if a speculator had advance warning of stock prices they could manipulate the market and cause the company to go bankrupt, costing people their jobs, and possibly their savings

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. The danger

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is that having

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detailed economic

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freely available may be used by some people to profit at the expense of others. In conclusion, whether the sharing of

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is a positive or negative step is debatable, in my

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some

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should be shared freely,

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as for scientific studies. That being said, I would agree

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that other more sensitive data, in the financial area, need not be so widespread for fear of causing economic instability.