In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

In the world, there are many people who prefer eating so much junk food and having health problems from it. It is often argued that the government should increase the tax fee on that type of meal. I completely agree with
this
statement and shall give my reasons below.
First
of all, I think that authority should raise the prices of unhealthy foodstuff. Even if the costs get expensive, the people will not effort to pay for it and they will be obligated to buy another meal. While it is cheap it attracts people's attention.
For example
, in a small region of Sweden government decided to do an experiment in
this
area and climbed the fast food's fee, so they observed how people change their taste and began to eat healthier.
That is
why it is possible to deal with
this
problem in
this
way.
On the other hand
, the state should punish those restaurants and require to not sell junks. If they cook a healthy dish
instead
of an unhealthy meal when a person is hungry and comes there for eating so
then
he or she shall have to order it.
For instance
, most of the villages in my country there are not many fast cooking places and citizens eat healthy food mostly, so they have stronger body than big city's population.
Thus
, it is crucial to not ignore
this
issue. To conclude, I believe that for reducing the amount of people who has health problems of eating too much snacks, governments have to impose a huge tax on
this
kind of meal and should abuse the restaurants which sell fast dish.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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