THERE IS GROWING EVIDENCE THAT MAN-MADE ACTIVITIES ARE MAKING GLOBAL TEMPERATURES HIGHER. WHAT MIGHT BE THE MAN-MADE CAUSES OF TEMPERATURES RISING? HOW SHOULD WE DEAL WITH THIS PROBLEM? GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLES FROM YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE OR EXPERIENCE

Nowadays, there have been ongoing debate about
role
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the role
of adverts in the society.
some
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Some
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that it
give
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gives
us the
products
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product
infomration
a message received and understood
information
which may be
benefitial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
to us, while I
argue that often
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often argue that
advetising
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
leads us to purchase
product
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a product
products
which may be not required. In
this
essay, I will discuss
relavent
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
reasons and five supporting examples. Examining the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
view, primary argument supporters would put forward is that
marketing deparment
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the marketing department
marketing department
of the companies
focus
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focuses
on
specific age group
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specific age groups
a specific age group
to increase their revenue. Adverts,
for example
, contain
image
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images
of cartoons and chocolates which attract children to buy
chololates
compare critically; of texts
collates
or sugary products.
This
lead them for the obesity in very young age.
Furthermore
, there
are
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is
a plethora of
products
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product
marketing
such
as pizza, burger or coke, could be unhealthy for one.
Thus
, promoting the product might lead a person for the health related issues.
In addition
to above mentioned points, there are many advertisings where one cannot confirm the facts. A good example of
this
is
body cream
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a body cream
for
fareness
an agenda of things to do
fares
. In reality, no one can get
fareness
an agenda of things to do
fares
in just four weeks as shown in the promo. On top of that, multinational companies are using popular actors,
soportmen
someone who engages in sports
sportsmen
, or social media
influencer
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
to promote their products.
This
kind of marketing
attract
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attracts
thier
of them or themselves
their
fan following and huge amount of the people. Each
influencer
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
has minimum of few
millon
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
million
follower
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followers
on social media platform and targeting
this
group
has became
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has become
easy by posting a post,
for instance
. To conclude, while many people vary
thier
of them or themselves
their
opinion about
this
encouragment
the expression of approval and support
encouragement
from advertising, I strongly believe that none can verify facts and figures behind
this
adverts
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advert
by seeing a minute video. These are just promos which could help
compay
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Compay
company
to increase their top line.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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