It is important that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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I partially agree that children with varied abilities and those from various social backgrounds should relate with each other.
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is because it has both good and not so good effects.
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, children with with no moral values can be a bad influence on their peers
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that a child who used to be respectful and God fearing can change and become the opposite. Other bad habits like not studying, staying up late at night and partying are some other examples.
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can
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the child's relationship with his or her family members and pose problems later in life. Their language can
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be affected adversely from good to bad as they can pick up slangs that will affect their language skills.
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, a group of kids whose parents moved to a new country where children do not speak English correctly started having issues with grammar and even picked up wrong vocabulary in the course of interacting with other kids in their school.
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Conversely their
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Conversely, their
interactions can have
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good sides. Children can improve their skills, broaden their experience as they mix up with their peers. They can help each other with school work and
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have better grade and better prospects in Pin

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Promotes Inclusivity
  • Fosters Equality
  • Appreciate Diversity
  • Equitable Society
  • Broad Perspective
  • Problem-solving Skills
  • Real-World Diversity
  • Navigate
  • Global Society
  • Strive for Improvement
  • Unique Talents
  • Healthy Competitive Spirit
  • Reduce Social Inequality
  • Access to Resources
  • Empathy
  • Social Skills
  • Communication
  • Teamwork
  • Conflict Resolution
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