Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children spend their free time. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Children are the future generation and their development is very important. Some people think they should more focus on studies in their free
time but
others are opposed to it. Children should be both mentally and physically strong. Accept comma addition
time, but
This
essay intends to explain the reasons why in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Homework is mandatory for every children
in schools because it is a revision of what they have Suggestion
child
study
there. Suggestion
studied
Also
, it is a way to check whether students are learning in the right direction. In addition
, they have to be more focussed due to increasing competition. They have to study more hard
to remain in front. Suggestion
harder
For example
, cut off score is near to 99% to get admission in good colleges.
Children should not kill their precious time
in only doing school work. Their physical developement
is equally necessary as mental. They should play outdoor games in their free act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
time
. Excercise
is very important to remain physically fit and helps in Suggestion
Exercise
development
of Suggestion
the development
body
. Suggestion
the body
Also
, they can follow their hobbies in their spare time
like dancing, cooking, etc. For example
, if one is having good skills in dancing, then
he or she can become a good dancer and can join film industry. Children should spend their free time
in extra curricular
outside the regular academic curriculum
extracurricular
activites
.
To sum up, children should spend their free any specific behavior
activities
time
based on interest. Extreme of anything is not good whether it is not good whether it is studies
or Suggestion
studied
excercise
. There should be a balance between them as both are equally important in their growing age.the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
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