33. Nowadays, food has becomes easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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With the industrialization, inhabitants are able to easily assess a variety of cooked
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or well-prepared ingredients from supermarkets or
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stores. Some citizens believe that
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kind of service improves the standard of daily lives. I personally opine 
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view and the essay will discuss about it with examples.
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with, in the contemporary era, inhabitants are able to spend less
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in preparing their daily meals due to the conveniently packaged ingredients on the markets or
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stores.
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, in the past, preparing ingredients during cooking occupied much
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.
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, people with hectic work schedules tended to eat outside or preferred canned
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.
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, currently with the conveniently-packed meats or vegetables, they are still able to cook nutrient
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for their family in a limited period.
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, people
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have more 
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for personal relaxation, social interaction, family play
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, travelling, and sports activities etc. Their lives will become more colourful.
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, residents remain keeping cleaner living environments in their places due to well-packaged ingredients for homemade meals. In the past, without meal processing factories or stores, the inhabitants had to prepare their ingredients in their own places. Eventually, during the process, the smelling of meats or wastes from meats leaded to dirty living environments. Currently, these
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packages eliminate
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issue.
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, residents are still able to maintain a clean living environment or a high living standard even though they frequently cook at home.  In conclusion, due to easy access to well-prepared ingredients on supermarkets or
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stores, people tend to cook more healthy
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and lead a better lifestyle. They definitely enjoy their daily lives by themselves or with their family members due to above reasons.
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