Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museum are not needed anymore.To what extent do you agree?

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a vital role to keep alive the past and tradition of a country or a nation. Even though the data regarding past and culture are available on the

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, the

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has its own importance to uphold the data in a vivid way. In my opinion, to have a primary idea, sources of the

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can be useful, while the

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is still essential to have depth knowledge.  There is no doubt that the

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contains plenty of data about the past of mankind and the tradition of a nation. While people can easily educate themselves by surfing through the various sources of the

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does not mean that the necessity of the

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has reduced.

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, data on the

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is not always as accurate.

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, people could have wrong data about other cultures or past.

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, searching on

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about world war 2, different types of data will appear, which confuse a person about what to accept.

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nfusion can be taken away by visiting a

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have trustworthy data regarding the past of world war 2.

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, To study our past, the

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still has its own importance.

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, scientists are always studying the fossil of dinosaurs to know our history.

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, the

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let us experience the culture and history in person, while it is totally impossible through the

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.  To conclude, The

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and

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y a vital role to enlighten the past and tradition of mankind. The

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can be used to gain a general idea, while the

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will ensure the accuracy of the data.