There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved

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Chris Lobo, I am writing

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letter to address the complaints received about the reception area and suggest some solutions to

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problems. People have complained about the seating arrangement in the reception area. It is placed in a direction

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blocks the way to our desks.

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, visitors

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complained about

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of staff to provide them water. I think the reception area is important as it allows visitors to have a place to wait comfortably. We could improve it by placing a small water tank in the right corner.

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, I would suggest

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the sofas to the right so it does not block anyone’s way.

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, we should put company’s brochure, magazines and

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for visitors to read while they are waiting. I hope that my suggestions would be helpful to reduce or completely eliminate the complaints. Let me know if you agree with

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so I could make the necessary changes. Yours sincerely, Himanshu Patel

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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complaints
reception area
unwelcoming
signage
aesthetic appeal
directional signage
ticketing system
professionalism
feedback system
continuous improvement
welcoming atmosphere
efficient
clear signage
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