In general, people are living longer now. Which of the following do you think accounts for this phenomenon? • Technological improvements • Changes to education systems • Improvements to our diets Use specific details and examples in your answer. You may choose more than one cause.

Without a doubt, people are living longer these days than ever before. In my opinion,

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is a result of many helpful technological advances. I feel

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way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

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of all, developments in medical science have saved and lengthened many lives. Newly discovered pharmaceuticals and medical devices assist doctors in a wide range of ways. They help in the prevention of illness, in the diagnosis of disease and during treatment. My personal history is a compelling example of

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. Several years ago I was diagnosed with skin cancer. Fortunately, my cancer was discovered at a very early stage and my doctor treated me right away.

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, I fortunately avoided experiencing any unexpected side-effects. All of

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happened at a modern facility at a high-tech hospital close to my home.

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, several decades ago my grandfather passed away

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of prostate cancer. He was diagnosed properly, but not soon enough to save his life.

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was because there was simply no technology available to make the diagnosis at that time.

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, modern technology gives individuals much more manageable working lives than people had in the past. These days a

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of tasks are automated, which means they are carried out by computers or robotic systems.

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means that, unlike in the past, employees don’t need to spend long hours at their workplace every day.

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, I

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just thirty-five hours each week.

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gives me plenty of time in the evenings and weekends to get a

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of exercise and to relieve my stress by pursuing my hobbies.

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, most of my friends and colleagues have a similar schedule. I am quite certain that my anxiety-free life and healthy body will help me to live a long time. My uncle, who is much older than I, worked more than forty-five hours each week during his career. Without machines to pick up the slack for him, his duties were physically demanding and he developed a

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of mental health problems as he aged. The toll his work took on his body was a major cause of his early death by heart attack, in my opinion. The comparison of myself and my uncle demonstrate how today’s employment conditions help us live longer. In conclusion, I strongly believe that technology is the main reason why people today live longer than earlier generations.

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is because it helps us to avoid serious health problems, and it makes our working lives a

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easier to bear.