In general, people are living longer now. Which of the following do you think accounts for this phenomenon? • Technological improvements • Changes to education systems • Improvements to our diets Use specific details and examples in your answer. You may choose more than one cause.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • advancements
  • innovations
  • mortality rate
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • public health campaigns
  • nutritional science
  • superfoods
  • balanced diet
  • disease prevention
  • quality of life
  • wellness
  • chronic diseases
  • early detection
  • minimal invasive surgeries
  • emergency services
  • diverse food choices
  • longevity
  • physical fitness
  • work-related hazards
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