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In general, people are living longer now. Which of the following do you think accounts for this phenomenon? • Technological improvements • Changes to education systems • Improvements to our diets Use specific details and examples in your answer. You may choose more than one cause.

#people #accounts #phenomenon #improvements #changes #education #systems #diets
Today's
world
 is different in many ways as many new inventions make dramatic changes in people live. One of these discoveries is the Internet.
Internet
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The internet
 has considerably influenced our
live but
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live, but
 some thought
Internet's effect
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the Internet's effect
 is a good thing while others believe it negatively ruined many aspects of our
live
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lives
life
. I think
Internet
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the Internet
 has mostly positive effects on both individuals and communities live. If we look at it from the individual prospective, we can clearly see how
Internet
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the Internet
 makes people social interaction faster and
more convenience
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more convenient
more conveniently
. One can reach his friends and acquaintances wherever they are around the
world
 while
setting
(photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)
sitting
 at home.
This
 has made the social relationships stronger and,
as a result
, increased people happiness. Online apps and social media websites exemplified the modern ways of how people communicate. I still remember when I was studying
abroad how
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abroad, how
 much bored I was. When I managed to have my own internet access in my apartment, I communicated with my family and friends online. I have been spending many hours
in
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on
 video chat with them. That has made me feel like I was not so far from them.
Internet
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The internet
really shrank
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has really shrunk
 the spaces and transformed the big
world
 into
small village
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a small village
the small village
small villages
. From other prospective, societies have received a huge positive
rewords
a recompense for worthy acts or retribution for wrongdoing
rewards
 from the Internet deployment. Modern approaches of governance and digital governments have been emerged. Different public offices are now connected together through
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
 for more cooperation and for better services achievement.
Additionally
,
governments'
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government
 agencies can interact with the public electronically. I have found it easy process
last
 month when I used the Interior Ministry website applying to get
new passport
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a new passport
new passports
. I uploaded all documents needed and transferred the fee in a convenient way. Today, I can pay most of my bills using phone applications. These contemporary methods reduced the amount of time and cost that used to be spent in
such
 dealings. In conclusion, wide use of
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
 has led to significant improvements on the personal level as well as on countries as a whole. It brought the far away people together virtually and made them interact as if they are in the same room. Governments found a good opportunity in using online methods to do its obligations in easy and profitable ways. No one can deny that the good effects of the digital
world
, Internet, are overwhelming its minor bad side effects.
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