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Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. discuss both views and give your opinion.

#believe #people #leaders #leadership #skills
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In recent
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, there have been separate views on
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the
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The
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 school of thought stands for, leaders birthed with traits while the other stands for leaders being trained.
This
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 essay shall explain both stands. Though, I am of the opinion that
leadership
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 skills can be
learnt
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learned
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, in biology, traits are transmitted from parents to Offspring
leadership
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 characters are not excluded.
in
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In
Crenshaw University
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Crenshaw, University
, a research chain was concluded concerning
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 topic and it was discovered that, offspring of prominent world leaders
come
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comes
 with a high degree of
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leadership character
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leadership, character
 as well and need little or no training before the skills are exhibited. A prominent example of an inborn
leader
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 is Rudolf Stern, a highly skilled Russian General who led and won many battles for the Russian resistance army.His Father was Vladamir Stern, an equally skilled military
leader
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, leaders can be trained and bred.
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, a child is considered a blank slate, experiences and lesson can mould them to developing certain skills, with Time and frequency of use, mastery is attained.A solid example of a bred
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 was Napoleon
Bonaparte who
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Bonaparte, who
 was a timid country Side Boy, but after passing through a series of trainings from the military, he became a renowned military
leader
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 in France who had a ton of victories under his stint. In conclusion, both sides are valid and have their various evidences of
occurrence but
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occurrence, but
 I shall remain with the school of thought that agrees that
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 can be learnt.
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