In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the recent past, we have witnessed a tremendous increase in the number of online courses being offered to students in various subjects.

This

has surely decreased

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is surely decreasing

the dependence on traditional classroom education for many.

However

, in my opinion the role of teachers in learning cannot be replaced by any other mode of education. It can be

agreedthat

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agreed that

online courses offer

number

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a number

of benefits.

First

and foremost, students can learn anytime and from anywhere in the world.

Course

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The course

A course

can be selected on the basis of one’s schedule.

For Instance

, students can study while sitting at the comfort of their homes or while

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

Secondly

, students can

also

choose the pace of the course they are studying. Every student has a different ability of learning and, can

taketime

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take time

till they have fully understood the lesson.

On the other hand

, it can be argued that conventional classroom teaching is best for the holistic development of a child. Classroom teaching encourages

debates

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debate

and discussion which

enhances

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enhance

the learning ability of children and it encourages

health

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healthy

competition as well. These 2 attributes work like assets while securing employment positions in

future

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the future

Further

, teachers respond to student’s queries in real

time which

Accept comma addition

time, which

is absent in online courses. Various subjects

such

as chemistry and biology need the controlled environment of laboratories for learning; experiments conducted by students needs to be monitored by teachers for safety and better understanding. To sum up, though the popularity of online courses is increasing due to ease of study and the availability of a plethora subjects offered, still it cannot replace traditional classroom studying with the help of teachers. Teachers form an integral part of learning and development of children.

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