In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the recent past, we have witnessed a tremendous increase in the number of online courses being offered to students in various subjects.

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has surely decreased

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is surely decreasing

the dependence on traditional classroom education for many.

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, in my opinion the role of teachers in learning cannot be replaced by any other mode of education. It can be

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agreed that

online courses offer

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a number

of benefits.

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and foremost, students can learn anytime and from anywhere in the world.

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The course

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can be selected on the basis of one’s schedule.

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, students can study while sitting at the comfort of their homes or while

traveling

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, students can

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choose the pace of the course they are studying. Every student has a different ability of learning and, can

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take time

till they have fully understood the lesson.

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, it can be argued that conventional classroom teaching is best for the holistic development of a child. Classroom teaching encourages

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debate

and discussion which

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enhance

the learning ability of children and it encourages

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healthy

competition as well. These 2 attributes work like assets while securing employment positions in

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the future

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, teachers respond to student’s queries in real

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is absent in online courses. Various subjects

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as chemistry and biology need the controlled environment of laboratories for learning; experiments conducted by students needs to be monitored by teachers for safety and better understanding. To sum up, though the popularity of online courses is increasing due to ease of study and the availability of a plethora subjects offered, still it cannot replace traditional classroom studying with the help of teachers. Teachers form an integral part of learning and development of children.

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