Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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, Some individuals believe that the key environmental

problem

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is the extinction of some plants and animals, the other believes there are more other concerning environmental issues. In

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essay both views are thoroughly discussed. Examining the former view, Every flora and fauna have their specific importance in ecological cycle. All are directly or indirectly dependent on each other as a chain reaction.

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, earth worm plays a vital role in the growth of plants with the help of nitrogenises process and in the end it becomes part of the food chain.

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, if one block misses in

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natural process, drastic changes can be seen at all levels of the cycle.

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, if once a species are lost,

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it is almost impossible to get it back, no matter to how much extent we try.

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, there are a plethora of other environment related issues, which are needed to attention in prior basis.

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, depletion of natural resources in an uncontrollable manner, which will lead us to the

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of unavailability in the future.

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, all the fuel mines on earth are loosing its reserve exponentially, due to

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it has been forecasted that in

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next fifty years

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the next fifty years

we will lose all of our fossil fuels.

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, the

problem

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of pollution control should be our top priority as due to

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we are facing some grave

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such

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as Ozone depletion and Global warming, as a side effect it leads to un-periodic weather pattern and melting of glaciers.

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, due to after effects of pollution all habitats of innocent animals are getting effected, natural forests life is becoming harsh and harsh for their habitat. In conclusion, All issues are important if it is related to the environment. In my opinion, all are dependent on each other if one gets affected

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then

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the other will get too, so all concerns need to be addressed on equal priority.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
interconnected
climate change
pollution
personal actions
policy changes
education
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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion؟

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