Some think that experiment done on animals are cruel so it should be prohibited. To what extend do you agree?

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NOWADAYS, INNOVATION IN THE SCIENCE FIELD IS SURGING TO MUCH EXTENT.
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PROCEDURES DEMAND A PLETHORA OF ANIMALS TO BE TESTED. THERE ARE CERTAIN FOLKS WHO BELIEVE THAT USING
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FOR THE TESTING ANY NEW FORMULA OR TREATMENT IS CONSIDERED AS A DETRIMENTALMACTION BY HUMAN LIKE SELFISH.
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ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY OPPOSE THE THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO VARIOUS REASON WHICH IS DISCUSSED BELOW WITH RELEVENT EXAMPLE.
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OF ALL, DOING EXPERIENT ON
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MAY LEAD TO ECLINE IN THE NUMBER OF WILD
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COMMUNITY
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MUCH ESSENTIAL TO MAITAIN THE ECO-SYSTEM OF THE ENVIRONMENT.
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, AS PER THE USA WILD-LIFE DEPARTMENT, 80% OF THE ANIMALS SENT TO THE LABORATORY
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YEAR FOR TESTING NEW MEDICINE.
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, SOME ANIMALS BECAME EXTINCT.
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, IT SHOULD BE BANNED TO USE ANIMALS FOR THE TRYING PURPOSE.
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OF ALL, AS HUMAN FEELS PAIN IN HURTING IN THE SAME WAY ANIMALS EXPERIENCES TOO. AND
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KIND OF ACTIVITY SHOW THE CRUALTY TOWARD THE
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NOT COUNTABLE WORK.
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, AS PER THE VETENERY STUDY, 60% OF THE ANIMALS HAVE THE FEELING ND ATTACHMENT SAME AS HUMEN. IF WE HURT THEIR ONE OF THE FAMILY MEMBER, THEIR FAMILY GETS HURT AS WELL.
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, SOME SCIENTFIC METHODS CAN NOT APPLY ON HUMAN OR ANY OTHER BIRDS
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AS TRYING NE ANTIDOTS OF THE SEVERAL SERIOUS DISEASES LIKE CANCER. AS IT HAS MAJOR ADVERS EFFECT ON PERFECTLY FIT INDIVIDUAL AND DISEASED PERSON IS UNFIT FOR USING IT BEFORE ACCURATE RESULT. IN CONCLUSION, ANIMALS INDEED A MEDIUM FOR A HUMA TO MAKE
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EXPERENT SUCCESSFUL AS SCIENTIST. PERHAPS, ON E SHOULD NEVER USE THEM ABOVE THEIR LIMITS RATHER THAN FINDING A LTERNATIVE FOR SO. TO FIND THE ALTERNATVES, GOVERNMENT CAN HELP THOSE PEOPLE BY SUPPORTING THEM.
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WAY, THERE WOULD BE NO HARM TO AN ANIMALS JUST FOR OUR SHAKE.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cruel
  • prohibited
  • controversial
  • ethical concerns
  • benefits
  • medical research
  • scientific knowledge
  • new treatments
  • regulated
  • ethical guidelines
  • minimize harm
  • alternative methods
  • explored
  • encouraged
  • public opinion
  • divided
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