You found a problem with the item which you bought it online. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter, you should: •describe the item •explain what the issue is •suggest what you expect the manager to do

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Hi Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the product that I have bought online from your website. Two weeks ago,I ordered an online iPhone 15 Grey colour and it was delivered yesterday . As I was very excited about my new phone, I started to use it and was working fine till the today morning.But ,suddenly around 11.30 am, it turned off .Earlier,I thought might battery issue so I kept it on charging but after the one-hour plug-in

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,it did not start .I tried to switch on multiple times but nothing is happening. I request you to look into the matter.I am sending the phone back to the company address ,please help to check what is the issue on priority and help to resolve it .If the phone is not able to start

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help to replace it with the new handset as I have warranty and guarantee for 1 year . Looking forward to your assistance soon. Yours faithfully, Payal

pskhandelwal13Thu Jan 16 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity.

Task Achievement

Include more specific details about the problem to strengthen your task response.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, maintaining politeness throughout.

Task Achievement

The tone is appropriate for a formal complaint letter, respectful yet assertive.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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defective
malfunction
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resolution
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You found a problem with the item which you bought it online. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter, you should: •describe the item •explain what the issue is •suggest what you expect the manager to do

E. Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the government should support the funds for the arts, while some other people suggest that the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss bith views and give your own opinion.

In many countries, individuals or their employers pay for medical treatment. Should the government be more responsible for the health of their citizens? Discuss and give your opinion.

In today's digital age, the widespread use of social media has become an integral part of society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon. To what extent do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks? Provide relevant examples and support your arguments with evidence

In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healtier than ever before. However, they are often less happy and more agiatated in actions and behaviors. what do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?