The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The diagrams illustrate the existing plan of a university’s sports centre
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
the proposed plan following the building. Overall,
this
sports centre is likely to undergo some significant changes. The most striking changes are the development of the
two
outdoor courts and the addition of various sports facilities. At present,
this
centre has a large building in the middle and
two
outdoor courts to the west and east. Inside the building, there is a reception facing the main entrance, a 25-metre swimming pool behind the reception and a gym at the back. People can access the seating area by the door on the right of the reception desk, while the door on the left leads to the changing room. According to the
second
map, the
two
outdoor courts will be merged with the main building. On the original site of the western outdoor courts, a large leisure pool will be constructed, while a big sports hall and
two
studios for dancing will be built on the site of the other outdoor courts. There will
also
be
two
additional changing rooms, a new café and a sports shop on on either side of the main entrance. The gym is
planned
Suggestion
planning
to double in size, while the remaining features will stay unchanged.

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