Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, media like TV and internet have
change
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changed
to the most primary source for getting information among people world-wide. There is a viewpoint that the media should just disseminate good news. Personally, I agree with
this
view
for several reasons that will mentioned as follows. Overall, the hearing of bad news
have
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has
detrimental impacts on individuals specially teenager. Reports of war,
for example
, can create a pessimistic
view
from
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of
their surrounding environment.
This
happening
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happens
worried them for future about
this
issue that, it perhaps occur
for
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to
us, 'teenager says’.
Consequently
, they
may became
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may become
disappointed for more effort because of their anxiety.
In contrast
, good news, exactly hopeful them to
future
be unsure or weak
falter
, and give higher motivation them for more effort and better efficiency. Another reason for
this
view
is more calm between families. Nowadays,
majority
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the majority
of families
at
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in
the most world countries are
struggle
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struggling
with the economy problem. For
this
reason it is natural that have involving mind. If media published the bad news, it can add more worry in their mind and have
negative effect
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a negative effect
on their behaviour. As a personal experience, in my family, when the family members heard a news relative with the
expensive
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most expensive
expenditure
or commit a crime in their nation, they arbitrarily became anxiety and aggressive behaviours emerged, but when we get decision just pay attention to the good news
such
as
reduction
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the reduction
of unemployment during the period of one year or science international achievements, it gradually created a good sense among family members.
Therefore
, I think
this
event
help
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helps
to have
more grateful family
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a more grateful family
. To sum up, we should accept
this
fact that, negative news
have
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has
deleterious effects on the
people
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person's
manner particularly teenager and
also
families.
Thus
, in my
view
we should try avoiding
get
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getting
bad news through
media
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the media
and effort for receiving
good news
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the good news
of it.

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