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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as posssible,while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that formal
education
 is necessary for children at younger ages while others have op
posite view t
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the opposite view
an opposite view
hat it should not initiate until 7 years old .
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It
s obvious that young generation becoming more and mo
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smarter
han the past and their ability to get new information and educate new subject increase dramatically. I think an early commencement of study would be more beneficial and vital than a later start. On the one hand ,
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me people hold the view that young children should start learning formal
education
 as soon as possible in order to some reason .
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new generations
the new generation
a new generation
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make easier
facilitated
nd technological circumstance in compare of past decades ,
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sharpens
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instance, there
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gadgets
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media's
models
hat technology brings children to their house ,
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o kids have a chance to see and experience and learn basic knowledge from their birth ,
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They can prepare for
school
 at younger ages .
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And
tarting
school
 early has a positive and significant impact on their profession and educational future. On the other hands ,
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ther hold the opinion that sending children to
school
 before age 7 may have negative effects on their mind. if
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ids and toddlers begin formal
education
 sooner ,
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ey will lose their interest in studies and get board and tired .
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an initial opportunity
the initial opportunity
for children to spend their time with family and learn some more vital subject like love and care. To conclude ,
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though views differ about starting formal
education
 before the age of 7,I
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a younger age
younger ages
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