The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates the demographics of
Australia
as well as
Malaysia
between the years 1980 and 2002.
Overall
,from the year 1980 to 2002 the population
figures in both countries are in
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on
upward
trend; Correct article usage
an upward
nevertheless
, that of Malaysia
is remarkably higher than in Australia
. Whereas
the percentage of men
and women
are slightly distinctive, the whole population
, rate
of birth, the growth
of population
yearly and the elderly witness significantly
change.
In 22 years, the entire Change the word
significant
population
of Australia
considerably goes up from 14.7 million
to 19.6 million
, but it is less dramatic than that of Malaysia
. The data of
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for
Malaysia
in 2002, which is 24.3 million
is nearly twice as high as that in 1980 about 13.7 million
. Despite the stability of the rate
of men
and women
in Australia
, 49.9 million
and 50.1 million
respectively, in Malaysia
, the proportion of men
gradually climbs about 0,3% and the statistic for women
decline 0,3
%., Unlike Change preposition
by 0,3
Malaysia
, the figure for men
is less than that for women
in Australia
.
The two nations experience a downward trend in the rate
of infants in 2002 with 0,2% in Australia
and noticeably1% in Malaysia
. The growth
of population
every year on average in Australia
enormously rises 1
%; Change preposition
by 1
however
, the rate
of the
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apply
growth
in Malaysia
drops 0,3
% and Change preposition
by 0,3
Australia
has significantly lower growth
rates. The proportion of the aged in Australia
grows dramatically by 2,8%, which is more substantial than the rising figure in Malaysia
by 0,6%.Submitted by kieutrang310 on
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