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The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The table illustrates the demographics of
Australia
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as well as
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Malaysia
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 between the years 1980 and 2002.
Overall
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,from the year 1980 to 2002 the
population
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 figures in both countries are
in
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on
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upward
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an upward
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 trend;
nevertheless
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, that of
Malaysia
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 is remarkably higher than in
Australia
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.
Whereas
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 the percentage of
men
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 and
women
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 are slightly distinctive, the whole
population
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,
rate
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 of birth, the
growth
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 of
population
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 yearly and the elderly witness
significantly
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 change. In 22 years, the entire
population
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 of
Australia
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 considerably goes up from 14.7
million
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 to 19.6
million
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, but it is less dramatic than that of
Malaysia
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. The data
of
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for
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Malaysia
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 in 2002, which is 24.3
million
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 is nearly twice as high as that in 1980 about 13.7
million
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. Despite the stability of the
rate
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 of
men
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 and
women
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 in
Australia
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 , 49.9
million
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 and 50.1
million
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 respectively, in
Malaysia
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, the proportion of
men
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 gradually climbs about 0,3% and the statistic for
women
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 decline
0,3
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by 0,3
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%., Unlike
Malaysia
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, the figure for
men
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 is less than that for
women
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 in
Australia
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. The two nations experience a downward trend in the
rate
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 of infants in 2002 with 0,2% in
Australia
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 and noticeably1% in
Malaysia
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. The
growth
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 of
population
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 every year on average in
Australia
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 enormously rises
1
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by 1
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%;
however
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, the
rate
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 of
the
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apply
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growth
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 in
Malaysia
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 drops
0,3
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by 0,3
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% and
Australia
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 has significantly lower
growth
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 rates. The proportion of the aged in
Australia
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 grows dramatically by 2,8%, which is more substantial than the rising figure in
Malaysia
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 by 0,6%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, malaysia, population, men, women, rate, growth, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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