In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Our ancestors established law and order system to control and stop crimes. Unfortunately, the illegal activities are rising around the globe. In
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One reason might be lack of employment opportunities and poverty. Due to overpopulation, governments around the world are unable to provide jobs for their subjects and make them poor. Linking Words
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created resentment and in order to meet their ends, unemployed poor people are forced to commit crimes. Linking Words
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, recent studies reveal both unemployment and crime rates are at all time high. Linking Words
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, governments should find new ways for investment to establish industries and encourage start-up culture. Linking Words
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, impatience among the youngsters. In Linking Words
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modern era, children are used to get things quickly. Children will be easily influenced by their riches and comforts around them. To get instant money which their parents are unable to provide, they turn to crimes. So, parents should teach their kids about patience from the young age by encouraging them to meditate.
Another reason being lack of moral education. People have desires to become rich, Linking Words
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desire when turn into greed can make people to commit atrocities to achieve their targets. Linking Words
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, education with moral standards must be introduced in order to channel their minds in the right path. Linking Words
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, moral classes can be introduced to the students from the primary schools till university level.
To summarise, unemployment, poverty and lack of moral education are the reasons for the increase in crime. By increasing the opportunities to earn in the right way can reduce it.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite