It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future ? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

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Momentarily, in the contemporary world, there are various technologies which through masses overcome their problem rapidly. Robots do essential part of

modern era

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the modern era

. Some people assume that robots are crucial things for present globe.

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however

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However

, I believe that it is

negative development

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a negative development

for

country

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the country

. My explanation is given in

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paragraphs with suitable examples. To commence with

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there are certain problems which will be occur if robots are going to increase in our lives.

Firstly

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the

rasio

the relative magnitudes of two quantities (usually expressed as a quotient)

ratio

of unemployment will be enhance which is

major drawback

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a major drawback

the major drawback

for

nation

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the nation

a nation

. In exemplify

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globalisation through myriad of opportunities rapidly decrease for youth

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There are abundant people have not job platform to overcome their earnings problems. So

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authorities

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the authorities

will try to involve robots for

working

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working, then

then

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it is

major impact

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a major impact

for people and country.

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Second reason

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The second reason

is, not all the industries and factories will buy robots because rates of robots is high

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Which is essential for middle worker.

For instance

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, some small industry's

turn over

the ratio of the number of workers that had to be replaced in a given time period to the average number of workers

turnover

to the same degree (often followed by 'as')

quiet

lowest

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low

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thus

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Thus

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they

can not

cannot

afford to buy robots

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, robots work depends on programming methods which is set by

human but

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human, but

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some time method of robots will be change or damage

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At that time all the work going on wrong way which is detrimental things for their

owner

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owners

and people too. On the flip side

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robots through

plethora

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the plethora

a plethora

of problem overcome in

easy way

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an easy way

and extremely.

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robots

also

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used in agriculture for cropping. To recapitulate with

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future robots

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the future robots

will be very useful for all places and by using Robots people get fast result in all

fielts

having an (over)abundance of flesh

fats

faults

but some drawbacks is

also

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occur

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from

using robots.

Thu Feb 27 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

282 words

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future ? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport system such as railways and trams. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this.

The best/ only way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?