It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future ? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

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Momentarily, in the contemporary world, there are various technologies which through masses overcome their problem rapidly. Robots do essential part of

modern era

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the modern era

. Some people assume that robots are crucial things for present globe.

however

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However

, I believe that it is

negative development

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a negative development

for

country

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the country

. My explanation is given in

further

paragraphs with suitable examples. To commence with

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there are certain problems which will be occur if robots are going to increase in our lives.

Firstly

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the

rasio

the relative magnitudes of two quantities (usually expressed as a quotient)

ratio

of unemployment will be enhance which is

major drawback

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a major drawback

the major drawback

for

nation

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the nation

a nation

. In exemplify

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globalisation through myriad of opportunities rapidly decrease for youth

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There are abundant people have not job platform to overcome their earnings problems. So

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authorities

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the authorities

will try to involve robots for

working

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working, then

then

it is

major impact

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a major impact

for people and country.

Second reason

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The second reason

is, not all the industries and factories will buy robots because rates of robots is high

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Which is essential for middle worker.

For instance

, some small industry's

turn over

the ratio of the number of workers that had to be replaced in a given time period to the average number of workers

turnover

to the same degree (often followed by 'as')

quiet

lowest

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low

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thus

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Thus

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they

can not

cannot

afford to buy robots

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Moreover

, robots work depends on programming methods which is set by

human but

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human, but

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some time method of robots will be change or damage

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At that time all the work going on wrong way which is detrimental things for their

owner

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owners

and people too. On the flip side

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robots through

plethora

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the plethora

a plethora

of problem overcome in

easy way

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an easy way

and extremely.

Moreover

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robots

also

used in agriculture for cropping. To recapitulate with

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future robots

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the future robots

will be very useful for all places and by using Robots people get fast result in all

fielts

having an (over)abundance of flesh

fats

faults

but some drawbacks is

also

occur

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from

using robots.

Thu Feb 27 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Appropriate word count

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future ? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development.

A restaurant has placed for waiters in your local newspaper. write a letter to the applying fo the job . explain what you are currently doing . describe your suitabilitu for this area of week . say when you can attedn an interview.

Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible argument on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an official international language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a less of culture. What are your opinions on this?