In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say that children in these families benefit from the additional income, other feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give own opinion.

In the past, it was a custom for a father to be the only bread earner for the family. Fathers would go out to

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and earn money to fulfil the families’ daily needs and mothers would stay home to take care of the children.

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, nowadays, it is not rare to find

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parents going out to

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. Whilst the additional

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might bring benefits to

everyone especially

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everyone, especially

the children, there are a number of drawbacks that cannot be overlooked.

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essay will confer whether or not it is necessary for

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parents to go out to earn money for a living. In some families,

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parents are required to

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not because of their own will, but because circumstances demand them to. As living cost and everything is getting more expensive in today’s competitive world, some families might not earn enough to cover their living cost if only one parent goes out to

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. That being the case, there is nothing anyone can do to help.

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, the benefit of the extra

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for the children still remains unchanged. With more

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, parents will be able to afford more new toys, the latest gadget, and even vacation abroad.

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, children might feel abandoned due to their parents’ never being there for them. It is

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proven that children’s, whose parents are never at home, are more prone to behavioural problems.

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, my friend, Elaine, whose parents

is always working

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overnight and is never there for her when she needs them, has to battle with her insecurity of being unwanted every day, she, in turn, tries to seek the attention of her teachers by behaving badly in the class. From my example, you can see how parents’ absence can affect children in the long run. As far as I am concerned, there is no need for

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parents to be working unless it is really necessary. While additional

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is benefiting for the children, the presence of a mother will be best for the children’s well-being in the long run.