Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

In it undeniable that, in recent years more and more human activities, o
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in order to make
life
better to live, cause some bad influences on
environment
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the environment
. We can emphasize that some of them are climate
change
problems and pollution, that one may government should educate and encourage people to
safe
save from ruin, destruction, or harm
save
the nature and individual people should
change
their way of
life
. Two main problems that
harming
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harm
are harming
the
environment
more seriously are made by human industries and their lifestyle.
Firstly
, emissions produced by cars, heavy metals left by factories and deforestation caused by the transformation of the social structure by urbanization, all of them are causing to happen climate
change
problems.
Furthermore
, personal damages
such
as wasting electricity or using non-recyclable products
also
are putting the
environment
at risk. Government
are
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is
responsible for struggling climate
change
. They should teach people at a school, college or university and give them the courage to care of natural
life
.
Moreover
, they should put pressure on manufacturers to produce eco-friendlier products. As far as people
also
should use ecological items, saving energy and be aware that
this
way of
life
is necessary for the future of
environment
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the environment
. To sum up, it may take a long
time but
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time, but
it will definitely be worthwhile to
overcoming
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overcome
the environmental damages and it all can be with the help of population and the governments.
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