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Some people think believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

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People have different views about whether the animals should be kept in zoos or not. I believe that,
nevertheless
 it is a little unfair, but keeping animals in zoos can give people amusement and it is
also
 good
to
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for
environment
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the environment
. On the one hand, keeping animals in cages seems somehow unethical and of course, we have no right to steal their freedom.
In addition
, according to some environmental aspects, they might lose their instinct for hunting because of
this
. One should admit that,
zoos
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zoo
zoo's
 exhibit animals with the aim of making profit. So, there are numerous strong arguments against keeping animals in zoos for
environment
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the environment
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 some persuasive arguments to prove that keeping animals in zoos is in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of
animals`
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animal
 protection. In
such
 a way, they believe that endangered species can be protected and scientists can study their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Based on
social point
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a social point
 of view, zoos are entertaining, educational and fun. People can get
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
 experience and for children it is
more safe
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safer
 as well as enjoyable. It could be learnt to children to respect and protect the nature and wildlife. To sum up,
although
 it could harm or unjust to keep animals in zoos, we believe that some of them should be kept
for
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from
 humanity and children.
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