Some people think believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

People have different views about whether the animals should be kept in zoos or not. I believe that,
nevertheless
it is a little unfair, but keeping animals in zoos can give people amusement and it is
also
good
to
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for
environment
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the environment
. On the one hand, keeping animals in cages seems somehow unethical and of course, we have no right to steal their freedom.
In addition
, according to some environmental aspects, they might lose their instinct for hunting because of
this
. One should admit that,
zoos
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zoo
zoo's
exhibit animals with the aim of making profit. So, there are numerous strong arguments against keeping animals in zoos for
environment
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the environment
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
some persuasive arguments to prove that keeping animals in zoos is in
favor
promote over another
favour
of
animals`
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animal
protection. In
such
a way, they believe that endangered species can be protected and scientists can study their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Based on
social point
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a social point
of view, zoos are entertaining, educational and fun. People can get
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
experience and for children it is
more safe
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safer
as well as enjoyable. It could be learnt to children to respect and protect the nature and wildlife. To sum up,
although
it could harm or unjust to keep animals in zoos, we believe that some of them should be kept
for
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from
humanity and children.
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  • artificial enclosures
  • genetic diversity
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  • conservation efforts
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  • education platform
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  • reintroduction
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