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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In the
last
 decades, people’s habit of reading apparently change from paper books toward e-books which is important to discuss for people who love reading and interested in of
last developments
Suggestion
the last developments
 about it. As far as I am concerned, the
last
 changes affect of our reading style positively. There are several reasons why I believe e-books should be more common in daily life. The
first
 reason is that protecting an environment which is the most important one for natural life and the world we live in. As it appears, if using of e-books will have become popular in every area of life that means we could save more trees from cutting off and damage the forest less than what we do in present time. A good example of
this
 is what happened in England lately that the government had reduced the prices of kindle to make people willing to attend having e-books
instead
 of paper books which is decreased in a good way.
On the other hand
, yet it can be seen that the biggest barrier of
this
 situation is human’s habits,
that is
 why
this
 might be taking a while to change it when we monitor
last
 improvements in general. Especially, progressing between in different kind of world’s regions on
this
 matter can be specific and make the problems harder while trying to find solutions according to the people’s demand. In fact, it is an ancient feeling and using of paper books so we still need plenty of time. In conclusion, I strongly agree that e-books should be more common in the future for the benefit of everyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Adjustable font sizes
  • Built-in dictionaries
  • Environmentally friendly
  • Durability
  • Accessibility
  • Visual impairments
  • Tactile sensation
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Nostalgic value
  • Disconnect
  • Digital screens
  • Reading habits
  • Attentively
  • Retain information
  • Social and cultural experience
  • Economic disparities
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