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Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents fault others says that schools are to be blamed. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Prior to
this
 time
,
Accept space
,
the
way
 young people behave were generally acceptable, but in recent time the attitude of children is becoming alarming
as a result
 of poor upbringing and others believe that's learning institution should be blamed for these.
This
 essay will discuss both views and give my opinion. It is the primary responsibility of
mother
Suggestion
the mother
 and father to train their offspring. According to the Bible which states that parents should train up a child in a
way
 the should grow and when they get old, they will never depart from it.To
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
, when I was growing up, my parents taught me how to respect an elderly person whenever I see them.
Additionally
, due to negligence of husband and wife towards children these days, it has resulted into young ones to do things which the see their peer group portray. Eventually, behaving in a
way
 which is against the norms of the society.
On the other hand
, training institution is a place where variety of knowledge is acquired.
School
Suggestion
The school
do not focus
Suggestion
does not focus
 mainly on developing
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 student mentally but
also
 morally.
For instance
, a Friend of mine who attend Emmanuel college there, discipline
such
 as physical punishment is not incorporated because they believe that every individual have
human right
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human rights
a human right
.
Therefore
, allowing these
pupil
Suggestion
pupils
 to behave in a
way
 the wish. To conclude,
this
 essay discussed the reason why the attitude of children is increasingly growing
,
Accept space
,
the reason why parenting and learning institution is held responsible.
Inspite
Suggestion
In spite
 of the argument, I affirm to the fact that the parents
is
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are
 the primary teacher.

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