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very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is s critical skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that extra- curriculum activities are an indispensable part of
acedemics
associated with academia or an academy
academic
academics
 because these activities impart knowledge about values, attitudes and behaviour. Some people concern about the decreasing
value
 of
money
 among children and they suggest that it should be the part of
acedemics
associated with academia or an academy
academics
academic
. To the best of my knowledge,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think it would be a great idea to teach the
value
 of
money
 to children. There are various reasons of why
this
 skill should be added to
school curriculum
Suggestion
the school curriculum
school curricula
. The prominent cause behind
this
 is learning ability.
In other words
, at a very young age, they can learn
this
 easily because the learning ability is always high at
this
 stage.
As a result
, they will understand the
value
 of
money
 easily and can apply in the near future. Apart from
this
, parents can
also
 be benefitted. Whenever children learn the new things and they try to discuss and share that information with their parents.
Therefore
, parents can
also
 learn it and can teach them in a friendly way.
Thus
, it
do not help
Suggestion
does not help
 only children but
also
 can be beneficial for their parents.
On the other hand
, adding one more subject in the
acedemics
associated with academia or an academy
academic
 can put more burden on the children and they are not mature enough to handle that
burdon
an onerous or difficult concern
burden
button
 at a very young age.
Moreover
, learning
value
Suggestion
the value
 of
money
 is
very complex subject
Suggestion
a very complex subject
. Resultantly, it can put negative impact on the results of other subjects.
Thus
, it will not be added. In conclusion,
although
 learning about
value
Suggestion
the value
 of
money
 is a good idea yet it should not be added to
acedemics
associated with academia or an academy
academic
. The
practical
Suggestion
practice
 sessions and seminars can be held once in a week to teach them
instead
 of adding one more subject.
Therefore
, it will not disturb
performance
Suggestion
the performance
 in other subjects and they can concentrate on all subjects.

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