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Some people think cars are the best way to get around a city, while others prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #cars #city
It is a debatable issue, where some people claim that an effective method to travel around the city by cars while some
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argue
argument
 that cycling is more effective and save the city to get polluted.According to my opinion, I strongly believe that cycling is more effective than cars.
Firstly
, cars are more efficient against any kind of weather and the whole family can visit at one time.
Moreover
, if tourist want they can stop anywhere and relax.The comfortable seats and
air-conditioner makes
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air-conditioner, make
air-conditioner make
 your journey more relaxed, convenient and more relaxed. On the other side
,
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where cycling helps to protect the
enviorement
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
 to get polluted and less congested.Where numerous cars generate traffic and blocks the roads.So people
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don't really enjoy
 the viewing of great scenery.It's very convenient for parking.So you can easily find a parking space.
In addition
,
its
it is
it's
 more safe, reduce road accidents. In conclusion
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I
 would like to say that cities are the heart of any country and its mutual duty to keep safe our city to reduce the automobiles and encourage people to use more cycle and public transport.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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