In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, some little local stores
have been closing
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have closed
are closing
closed
due to customers are doing their shopping in distant larger stores. Whereas large shopping centres can offer a broad range of products, in my
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opinion, this
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is a negative development, since local shops can better serve the closer communities with fresh
food
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. On one hand, usually bigger shopping centres are part of an international entity which is present in several countries abroad.
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,
this
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kind of shops can offer to its clients a wide range of different brands and products.
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, not only some special coffee
brands but
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brands, but
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international seasoning can only be found in big shopping malls.
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, large shopping centres are
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
prepared
for many people when they want to buy some specific product.
On the other hand
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, small local markets do not need to have a huge
food
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warehouse, since the quantity is supposed to answer a local community demand only.
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, these shops tend to have more fresh
food
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than bigger ones.
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, there is no need for stocking high quantity of either fruits or
metas
the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food
meats
, because the same people visit the shop for buying them.
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, the products stay for just a few days on the shelves until they
are bought
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are buying
for someone. In conclusion, the large shopping centres can offer all
kind
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kinds
of products from different parts of the world;
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, the local markets are better in offering fresh
food
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for their customers.
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, I believe, having few local markets is a negative development.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail outlets
  • consumer behavior
  • shop locally
  • convenience
  • variety
  • economic growth
  • job creation
  • community
  • personal touch
  • small businesses
  • local economy
  • big corporations
  • dependence
  • shopping habits
  • urbanization
  • globalization
  • competition
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