Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Most of the people
tends
Suggestion
tend
to decide about their future career
gaols
the state of affairs that a plan is intended to achieve and that (when achieved) terminates behavior intended to achieve it
goals
, and try to achieve them. I believe that it is a good idea to determine about the future profession, since, it
help
Suggestion
helps
us to be more focused towards our educational goals, that ultimately help us in our professional
path
. There are several examples, including my own case, where since early age, I decided to be a public servant.
However
, it is not an easy
path
to follow. I have to choose wisely about my educational programs, and ended up studying public administration and policy sciences, that helped me to grasp some of the best theories in administration and policy making. The courses
also
help me to prepare during the competitive exams and build my general knowledge and writing skills. I was able to demonstrate better during exams and it
also
assisted me in my professional life.
However
, it is not always easy to choose about the career
path
so early.
there
Suggestion
There
are several determinants that influence the career
path
, which includes but limited to personal's
circumtances
your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
,
such
as parent's choice, family
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
condition and personal
apptitude
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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