In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses, so people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old houses in the local area. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many cities around the world, people have little influence
in
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on
their own home architecture and
design
. A majority of people advocate that the
presperior
in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich
prosperous
have rights to
design
their place of
resident
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residence
in a wide variety of architecture rather than being forced to construct it in a formal and predetermine
style
. In my perspective, a multiplicity of designing
model
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a model
is outweigh
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outweighs
its drawbacks.
To begin
with,
for instance
, in some central cities in Vietnam,
such
as Saigon, there
is
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are
only several
regulation
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regulations
about designing
house
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a house
houses
the house
, means that residents here can easily and freely build their own house in their
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
style
. Building and houses here are constructed in a dependent characteristic, represent a
diversity
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diverse
architecture in
this
city.
In addition
, housing here is constructed and decorated in a wide range of architectural designing, from European to Asian, demonstrate and
emphasis
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emphatically
a cosmopolitan atmosphere in
this
developed
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development
and multicultural city.
Furthermore
, unlimited designing may encourage local residents to enhance their creativity in designing
home
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a home
individually.
On the other hand
, the only disadvantage of freely
design
home is the lacking of uniformity and consistency. In several ancient and traditional
town
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towns
,
for instance
, Hoi
An
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A
, antique designing is
honored
having an illustrious reputation; respected
honoured
. Housing here only built
similarly
in a dependable
style
, traditional and historical.
However
,
this
uniformity designing
style
is the most charming attraction in
this
ancient town. In conclusion,
although
probably affecting some areas attractive by missing its unique characteristics, a diversity of architectural
design
may beautify cities and motivate local residents to be more innovative.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • architectural diversity
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • culturally enriching
  • cityscape
  • vibrant
  • personal expression
  • homeowner satisfaction
  • sense of ownership
  • economic opportunities
  • landmarks
  • cohesion
  • visual discord
  • aesthetic balance
  • property values
  • structural integrity
  • building codes
  • eco-friendly
  • sustainable building techniques
  • energy-efficient
  • environmental impact
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