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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true this statement? How far colours influence people's health and capacity for work?

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It is often believed that there should be some specific
colour
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 patterns to be followed while decorating workplaces, schools and hospitals. I do believe with
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 statement, as it can motivate people to work and influence their health. In
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colour
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 in one’s health and job. All people have a favourite
colour
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 or colours, and people even dislike some and it has got an impact on how someone behaves.
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, if a boss is angry over an employee and the employee wears an outfit with colours disliked by him, it would
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 increase his anger and vice versa, if the staff wears a dress and it's
colour
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 is soothing for the employer. So,
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the colours
 as asserted by psychologists has some impact.
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, when a hospital is painted, colours should be taken into consideration. The paint on the walls affect the mood of the patients and their health.
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, a patient with a minor ailment when admitted to a ward, and is afraid of blood, when sees the walls and ceilings, red in
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, would
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 make him more agitated as the always see the bright
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Therefore most
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Therefore, most
 of the hospitals have rooms white in
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, as it is light and soothing for the eyes and good for relaxation. To conclude, the colouring has an influence on peoples’ behaviour,
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, it is necessary to use apt colours for decorating buildings, hospitals and schools, both exteriors and interiors.

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