Some people believe that television programmes are of no real value for childrevn How far do you agree or disagree????

Most of the people think that
children
television
programmes
have no any relevance for
children
life.
However
,at present most of the channels are broadcasting many good
programmes
and those focusing at the education of
children
in different ages of life, these
programmes
are educational
as well as
informative enough to make
children
relax
while
learning.
Therefore
, I am in the opinion that_ all the programs do not have any value. Amidst of heavy and busy schedules of the
children
today, National geography, Animal Planet. ~will create good understanding about the
world
environment,
this
is where
children
get understanding about deferent species of the
world
. Sometime
this
will lead some
children
to learn environment as a subject tIn addition watching BBC, CNN will enhance
children
communication skills
Further
certain
programmes
will enlarge the capacities of
children
to
world
phenomenon
as well as
to improve their language skills. ~
For instance
in Sri Lanka very recently there is a
programme
have started call cookery with culture~ (nonsence), ~in
this
programme
talk about different cultural foods and how it make, but
in addition
the
programme
is trying to give a message on cultural diversity,
this
is an ideal
programme
for
children
to learn others cultural values and norms~ There is a recent
tv
programme
being telecasted to demonstrate how typical foods of each culture are prepared and thereby to promote cultural diversity. *It is a good example that education of
children
can be possible through extra-curricular activities, like cooking.* There is a recent
programme
being telecasted to demonstrate how typical food of each culure are prepared and thereby to promote cultural diversity. ~
Similarly
, now a days
children
are more engaged with their education activities and feel really exhausted and stressed
therefore
they need some leisure time for relaxed.~ _ As
children
are more exhausted with class room studies, these practical and creative
programmes
will add value to lessons that they follow in the school.
For example
, by watching cartoon network,
children
enter into the wonder
world
and feel fresh and energetic.
In addition
some
TV
channels run talent shows which provide good platforms for young
children
to shows their talent and nourish their skills._ ( with these two points I have my own arguments that these will create a negative impact: 1) cartoons- competative and conflict mentality among
children
2)
programmes
like talent shows make your moral high and parents boost chodren in a very selfish and competitive way.) In conclusion, *I would like to reiterate that under the supervision of parent
children
should have an opportunity to watch some
TV
programme
* s ( good point: but spoilled with a bad ending) ~and that will enhance their knowledge in different ways
as well as
there are good
programmes
will create
children
to gain many new ideas for their life and
this
will create quality person for the earth~, ~
finally
"I am" *strongly believe* that Television
programme
have some value for
children
life~. In conclusion I would like to reiterate that under the supervision of parents
children
should have an opportunity to watch
TV
prgrammes
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