Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

In today's world,

celebreties

a widely known person

celebrities

celebrations

can be

millionares

a person whose material wealth is valued at more than a million dollars

millionaires

thanks to their large rewards. Some people insist on that considering the contribution to the

society

, the rewarding for people who get involved in the entertainment is overpaid.

This

arguments

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argument

are

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is

definitely understandable and

persesive

intended or having the power to induce action or belief

persuasive

,

Accept space

,

provided that we focus on the occupation which can help a lot of people

such

as doctors or activists of environment. As far as the impact of the improvement of the

society

is concerned, there is no doubt that the value of the celebrities

are

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is

limited. Because even though ordinary people are able to have a

cheeful

being full of or promoting cheer; having or showing good spirits

cheerful

time with entertainment, their basic

qualitiy

an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone

quality

of the life cannot be improved. Giving the example, when Japanese people were suffering from the terrible earthquake which is called Tohoku Earthquake in 2009,

entertainment

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the entertainment

cannot save Japan from disaster. Only the people who help Japanese people from miserable panic were doctors, nurses and therapists. At that time, they have clearly recognised that we should have

priorized

express approval of

praised

promised

pressurized

the occupation who directly contribute the

society

, not admiring for celebrities.

However

, there is a serious social problem in Japan that because of low salary and hard work, less and less young people desire to become

such

saint

proffessions

the body of people in a learned occupation

professions

professionals

.

In stead

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Instead

of

choising

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

choosing

chasing

causing

those jobs, some of them are dreaming celebrities, which have cool image. According to the statistics published by the Japanese job market research institution, the most popular job for boys is

football player

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a football player

and for girls is

actress

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an actress

. Getting worse, the doctors and nurses are out of top 20. In order to change

this

situation, which invaluable jobs are less admired and respected, they should be more paid and rewarded. To sum up, we should judge the value of occupations how much it

contribute

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contributes

the

society

. From the view of

this

logic, celebrities are over-evaluated and over-paid.

Moreover

, Paying more money for jobs which directly save the

society

improve today's world better.