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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

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Between 2005 and 2025, there have been and will be a several changes regarding five commodities of fast foods that people prefer to consume in Melbourne. It is clear that the salad increased from 5 in 2005 to 15 in
present
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the present
 and according to the table it will rise to 41 in 2025.
However
, the consumption of Hamburger it remains stable, as comparing 2005 and present it drops 2. In the same situation is the Fried Chicken which
rise
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rises
 2 between 2005 and
present
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the present
. The predictions for 2025 for Hamburger and fried chicken shows that they will increase to 51 and 45 respectively. Regarding fried
rise
grains used as food either unpolished or more often polished
rice
 and noodles the consumption in 2005 it was the same for both. Nowadays the amount climbs to 9 and 8 respectively. There is not a big change about these trends as the predictions
shows
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show
 that in 2025, they will be 9 for both. Generally, the most famous fast foods remain hamburger and fried chicken followed by salad with a huge increase in its consumption.

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