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Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be care about it?

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After completing graduation student start searching for their desired profession through it is very tough to find out their task in preferable sector. Graduates
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 become upset about
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 for not getting
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job
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a job
the job
 and there has some several reasons behind
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.
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 essay will discuss the factors that create
such
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 situations and put the opinion about to eradicate
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 condition. On the one hand, subject selection is an important factor for getting desired
jobs but
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jobs, but
 most of the students are failing to select the proper subject which related to their dream profession.
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-a recent survey conducted by the University of Dhaka on their student and finds many bright students are not getting dream jobs because they was not select proper subject which student is treated as major qualification.
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, limited
job
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 opportunities
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 play a vital role not finds a better
job
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 in every sector.
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, experience and professional degrees require for getting a good
job
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 and fresher are
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failing
 to fill up with these demands
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.
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- Bangladesh bank recruited Human Resource Officer having
MBA
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an MBA
 in Human Resource Management and 2 years of working experience.
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, these problems need to take care of by the
job
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 seeker. At
first
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; they need to carefully select subjects according to their future role and they need to study well to get better marks which can help them to get
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job
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jobs
.
Job
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 opportunities are needed to be widened so that institution will recruit more newly graduates and employees will able to show their expertise in their imagination
job
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. Except specific position, no
job
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 experience for the fresher need to introduce.
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, high expectation about their dream
specialty
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Specialty
speciality
 needs to consider by students to overcome these situations. In a nutshell, fails to select the appropriate
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 related subjects, lack of
job
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 positions and professional maturity are reasons that caused the situation of not getting desired profession by graduates
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These situations should be changed by providing proper carrier oriented guild lines, completing professional degrees and creates more
job
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 opportunities so that people can get their chosen field.
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, the overall mentality of an employer towards fresher need to change which can play a vital role in getting
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job
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jobs
.

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