Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is believed that the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
have
Suggestion
has
full
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to take care of our planet.
On the other hand
, there is a high percentage that
think
Suggestion
thinks
each member of our society have the full
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to take care of our
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will engage both points of view and state my point of view.
First
of all, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
are the ones who can prevent climate change due to the fact that they are the ones who control the laws on emissions. But it
isnt
is not
isn't
in their interest because it has a big impact on making money.
For example
, Australia is a very
beautifull
delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration
beautiful
country with a very high minimum wage, but
dont care
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doesn't care
don't care
about their emissions. And lately
their
in or at that place
there
has been a lot of bush fires.
On the other hand
, if each
citezen
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizen
recycled, used a bicycle
instead
of a car or used a public transportation,
this
would
caused
Suggestion
cause
a huge impact on our planet in a positive way.
For example
, in Amstedam, they
normaly
under normal conditions
normally
use a free emission transport and most of their
citezins
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
recycle, and
their
in or at that place
there
is a pure air and not full of polluted air like in china. To summarize, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and the
citezins
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
citations
citizen
should unite together and help to fight these climate crises
instead
thinking
its
it is
it's
the others
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable practices
  • environmental protection
  • grassroots movements
  • community-led initiatives
  • policy implementation
  • regulations
  • funding
  • innovative solutions
  • collective effort
  • advocate
  • enforce laws
  • energy-efficient
  • reduce waste
  • recycling
  • sustainable outcomes
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