Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is believed that the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

have

Suggestion

has

full

responsability

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

to take care of our planet.

On the other hand

, there is a high percentage that

think

Suggestion

thinks

each member of our society have the full

responsability

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

to take care of our

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. In

this

essay

refers to the speaker or writer

will engage both points of view and state my point of view.

First

of all, the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

are the ones who can prevent climate change due to the fact that they are the ones who control the laws on emissions. But it

isnt

is not

isn't

in their interest because it has a big impact on making money.

For example

, Australia is a very

beautifull

delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration

beautiful

country with a very high minimum wage, but

dont care

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doesn't care

don't care

about their emissions. And lately

their

in or at that place

there

has been a lot of bush fires.

On the other hand

, if each

citezen

a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

citizen

recycled, used a bicycle

instead

of a car or used a public transportation,

this

would

caused

Suggestion

cause

a huge impact on our planet in a positive way.

For example

, in Amstedam, they

normaly

under normal conditions

normally

use a free emission transport and most of their

citezins

a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

citizens

recycle, and

their

in or at that place

there

is a pure air and not full of polluted air like in china. To summarize, I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

and the

citezins

a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

citizens

citations

citizen

should unite together and help to fight these climate crises

instead

thinking

its

it is

it's

the others

responsability

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

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220 words

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Fully explain your ideas

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