Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

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Nowadays, the pressure in our life regarding work and family was increased

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with the past. People tried to find ways to escape from these situations and in my opinion, they have found a high-risk way. A lot of people prefer to do an extreme sport like climbing or

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, to release the stress and pressure that may have, and not some simpler sports like running. In the society that we live today, it is more common to work for a living. To have the necessity to get the experience from some unusual sports it means that makes you feel alive and

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is what our civilization need.

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, people, which have authority in their position, sometimes needs to come face to face with the fear of their lives to adapt in ordinary life.

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, some people want to gain the adrenaline that these sports offer and

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can only accomplish by living on the edge. I believe

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a good trend for several reasons.

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, these sports have a crucial benefit in the economies of tourist destinations because they are expensive.

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, if someone like me which I am from Cyprus, wants to do a volcano boarding needs to travel in countries that offer the specific sport which means that I have to pay for my tickets and for the fees of

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sport.

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, to come across with death, it's not the only way to feel alive. There are other options to relax yourself and escape from problems that may have. A paradigm is to do sports that are not so risky like running or going to a gym, or the acquisition of hobbies could be even better for climbing a mountain. To conclude, it is a good trend and if I have the opportunity to do extreme sports in the future, I will do it without doubt.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Finally
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In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Adrenaline rush
Thrill-seeking
Personal growth
Accomplishment
Resilience
Risk management
Social recognition
Adventurous spirit
Endorphins
Fatality
Risk assessment
Cultural phenomenon
Recklessness
Safety precautions
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