Nowadays, online shopping has become more popular while some people argue in-store shopping would be better.    To what extent do you agree?

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Recent years, the number of people who purchase from online shopping is ever increasing. But, others think that in-store shopping is a great choice. I prefer online shopping and I consider
this
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as a positive development, due to several reasons.
First
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of all, it helps to save
time
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because people find it difficult to devote their
time
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to
shopping
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shop
because of their busy lifestyle.
For instance
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, they have a full-
time
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job which means that they have no
time
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to go shopping. Shopping can be easily done with the help of several online shops
such
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as Alibaba, eBay, Amazon, etc.
Secondly
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, online shopping can offer a cheaper price compared to the traditional
way
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of shopping.
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, in many stores products are not
affordable but
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affordable, but
they are costly indeed.
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, online shopping has a discount on its products and sometimes you will get extra bonuses too.
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Thus affordable
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Thus, affordable
price and discounts make online shopping more popular than another
way
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of shopping.
On the other hand
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, the delivery of
purchased
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purchasing
things may take a long
time
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.
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, online shops do not restore normal services without
delay whereas
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delay, whereas
you can buy clothes and other things immediately in stores after choosing. One thing that online stores cannot replace is the experience of actually seeing and touching the item you are considering buying. By the
way
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explanation, you cannot try on clothes before you buy. To sum up,
although
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online shopping does not give you a real sense of shopping and some problems may
occur
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occur, such
such
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as the delay in delivery and being unable to check the quality of the product. I believe that online shopping is more effective than the traditional
way
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of shopping.
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