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writing an letter to the restaurant owner that the noise bother your life and make suggestions.

Hi
my
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 neighbour, I’m writing
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 letter to inform you that the
noise
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 of your restaurant affecting my daily life seriously. To lower
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the
noise
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 and maintain the operation of your business at the same
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. I want to provide some suggestions. Please consider the advice below: Change the
time
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 of those
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-making activities to an acceptable
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.
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, Monday to Friday, please do those events in the
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time
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. The reason is I will be out for work. The
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 won’t bother me. At
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night
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 on the workday, please stop those annoying
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noise creating
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 jobs. And on the weekend, please shift the working
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 of those activities to the afternoon. If
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 above suggested
time
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 doesn’t fit your schedule, please contact me, and we can negotiate later. If you have any other method to lower
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the
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 to an acceptable zone
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 of changing the shift
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, it is
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 bearable. In
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 situation, please let me know your decision. Solving
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 issue is very urgent for me. Please act as soon as possible. For negotiation, I will be available anytime. Unsolved problems will not be allowable. Asking for help from the law firm or government-related institutions will be the act I will do at
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 point. Hopefully,
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 won’t happen. Thanks a lot, Katherine

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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