One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Advancement in technology has changed
life style
of people significantly in medical fieldSuggestion
the life style
.
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Therefore
, people are living longer time. Advance medical sector has benefits but
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benefits, but
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drawbacks of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
such
as increase
in population, unemployment and dependence of older age group on the society. Let us examine Suggestion
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this
statement in further
paragraphs.
To commence with, advance medical care rises population .
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likewise
cancer, heart diseases and many more which were uncureable
in incapable of being cured
incurable
bygone era
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bygone eras
the bygone era
a bygone era
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plural of "this"
these
facilities people are
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,
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of overpopulationSuggestion
issues
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Consequently
, unemployment become
major concerns among young populace because experienced people are the Suggestion
becomes
first
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a London university
UK which
revealed that 70% older age group is Suggestion
the UK, which
the UK which
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for
they
energy and better of them or themselves
their
health
as well as they avoid retirement from their jobs .
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Thus
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of young almost equal to zero in working Suggestion
the number
a number
fields
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the fields
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Additionally
, another disadvantage of inclining life
expectancy not only foe people but
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people, but
also
for the authorities. As it becomes moderate for the government to provide basic facilities to all people such
as accommodation, water and electricity .
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Hence
increasing number of people due to health
facilities indirectly effecting economy of the nation. To illustrate, in almost every county people over 60 are getting free of cost heath treatment as well as travel on half tickets which is at the end pay by
the governmentSuggestion
of
.
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On the contrary
, there is a one advantage of having longer
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a longer life
life
because of health
facilities is people are living with the mix
age groupSuggestion
mixed
.
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Moreover
, people can get advice from experienced people. As senior citizen can guide new generation
about difficult situations and motivate them Suggestion
the new generation
new generations
a new generation
by
their struggle.
To conclude, it can be said that modern Suggestion
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health
facilities are backbone
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the backbone
this
era but
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era, but
life
of people. As a result
having longer life
has corns which cannot be neglected such
dependence of older people on others, unemployment ,
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economy
so it is clear disadvantages are overweigh having longer Suggestion
the economy
life
’s advantages.Submitted by gurjeet14002 on
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