You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. • Correct the information in the article • Write a letter to the editor of the magazine to give correct information • Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation?

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Dear sir or madam, I am a regular reader of your magazine and I have always liked the articles published by you.

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, one

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which I read today has incorrect

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about my city. The original name of my city is Pratishtana pur from which the current name ‘Phaltan’ was derived in the year 1948, but the

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mentions the wrong year which is 1970. I am very proud of our historical place and people have the right to know the correct

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about our ancient town. I was quite surprised to read

wrong

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details and stunned

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the fact that the

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was published without any research or

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. I would like to make a humble request to correct the

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in the

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with an apology to people whose feelings were hurt by wrong

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. I would

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like to urge you to check the facts before publication. I am looking forward to seeing the corrected

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in the near future. Yours faithfully,

Meenu

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Sharma.

Submitted by naziya.bustani on Sat Feb 29 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
Authenticity

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