Some people say that success is ’10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work’. Is hard work the key to success, or is talent also important?

No
one
want
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wants
to be a loser in their life, they propose
success
as the main aim to reach. But everyone
know
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knows
it is not easy. They have their own views about which
one
is the key to
success
, hard work or
talent
.
However
,
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,
I believe both of them have their position on the way to be
success
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successful
. On the
one
hand, the price of
success
is hard work. Winners never quit and quitters never win. No
one
can reach their goal in only
one
try
,
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,
except they are extremely lucky. The more they practice
,
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,
the closer
success
they come
.
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.
The repeat action whenever they
fail
undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind
feel
will let them know where the mistakes
was
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were
. After many
time
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times
correcting them, they get what they want.
For instance
, a chef can not make an appetizing spaghetti unless he
try
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tries
until finding the right recipe.
On the other hand
,
talent
help achieve
success
easier. In some field like art or sport
,
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,
talent
is very important. If your singing skill was awful
,
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,
even you have practice very hard
,
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,
you still have to accept that your
skill just improve
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skill, just improves
skill just improves
a little but would not make you a singer
.
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.
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Besides
,
talent not
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talent, not
only help you more confident to solve the difficulty but
also
shorten the time you achieve your desire. In conclusion, everyone has their goals. If they can

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